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Post by ~Bronzefur~ on Jul 22, 2009 10:21:22 GMT -5
Name & Clan: Eaglekit ~ TunnelClan Age: 3 Moons Gender: Male (Tom) Allegiance: Tunnelclan Rank: Kit Description: Personality: Eaglekit is adventurous and likes to talk to people. He stands by the entrance of the nursery sometimes and waves over passing cats to talk to them. History: Eaglekit went with Desertkit to the warrior's den to see their dad. He got in more trouble than Desertkit did. Relatives: Eaglekit's father is Woodmask, his mother is Morningsky, and his kitmates are Mulchkit and Desertkit. Other: None
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Post by Wildheart on Jul 23, 2009 6:09:09 GMT -5
I'm just going to as kor a little bit more elaboration with this and other characters of yours in personality and history. You don't have to go overboard, but for example:
For Eaglekit here, I'd add (You don't have to add exactly this) to personality. He enjoys hearing stories of other cats because he's so curious. But he isn't confident enough yet to stray far form the nursery. His confidence has been growing with time though and he's starting to think about exploring further.
In history, you might add a little bit more, like while he was in the warrior's den he accidentally ruined one of the warrior's nests and got caught by a cranky senior warrior! In punishment he was confined to the nursery for a quarter moon.
You see the sort of example I mean?
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